Thursday, March 14, 2019
title - colour poem
in writing we have been writing colour poems .I liked gethng help to write my poem.
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Hey Ahron I really enjoyed your poem because it makes me nice and relaxed I also like how you have put an emoji at the bottom it is very funny.But you need to put more information in and more punctuation.And also so when are finished re-read your poem and check the spelling.
ReplyDeleteHi Ahron it is me connor I really liked you poem because this is true red is the emoji. Great workon your spelling and you punctuation. I have learnt more what red is about that its not jsut a colour . I remember learning my colour when i was little kid in the juniours. Next time maybe you could do your spaces longer that would be great. By Connor
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