Wednesday, October 24, 2018
The boy ran screaming through the Jungle for help because the volcano was erupting And after that he tripped on a rock and then the Lover got closer to him he got back up and ran into a tree and then the Lover tumbled over him and then he Didn't survive
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Hey Ahron it is me Merika I really liked your writing I really love it I also love how you have put in a lot of puncuation but next time can you please put a full stop at the end of the writing and also next time can you please put a picture in.
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