- I can feel the hotness from the fire
- And I can hear the rain bouncing off the river
- I can hear the fire crackling like popping candy
- And I can see the bright sun coming through the trees.
Thursday, June 28, 2018
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Kia ora Ahron, My name is Mark and I used to work in South Hornby last year, maybe you still remember me. I love this writing especially the third sentence “I can hear the fire crackling like popping candy”. I can see the fire burning and crackling in my head from your description. What was the purpose of this piece of writing
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting but I am new to South Hornby school. the
Deletepurpose of writing was to describe what I could hear on the tv.
We had to write a descriptive poem about an image we saw on the tv. I had heaps of fun writing it.
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